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Post by Akiko Chihiro Yamashita on Nov 7, 2011 19:31:05 GMT
Akisay it's just a mistake think I'd forgive you like that NAME: Akiko Chihiro Yamashita BIRTHDAY/AGE: 21st June, 18 GENDER: Female SEXUALITY: Straight OCCUPATION: Student FACE CLAIM:Mao Inoue
sometimes I'm hard to handle burn hotter than a candle
SPECIES:Mancer ALLIANCE: good WHEN WERE THEY BLESSED: 15th May when she was 5 ABILITY:Tempumancer ABILITY DESCRIPTION:slows, speeds, stops and skips (a couple of seconds) of time. As she has not really used her powers, she is very weak. Even the things that she is confident with she can only do for 5 minutes (give or take). She has yet to completely master any of the things she can do. She cannot really control her time skills.
feeling things that you can't deny going crazy and you don't know why LIKES:food Cars Her motocycle Japan sushi DISLIKES:government wasters (school dropouts on benefits ugghh) her parents ungreatfulness sexist people STRENGTHS:Religically obsessive (shintoism- can also be a weakness) Strong willed wise WEAKNESSES:talkative sensitive not very courageous FEARS:death loneliness GOALS:to win anything to meet her parents and give them a slap
when people ask me how I got here I just look at them and say MOTHER:Yuka Akiko Kimura FATHER:Ichigo Ryo Yamashita SIBLINGS:Unknown OTHER:Botan Honda (social worker) Kiki Yamaha (nurse) PLACE OF BIRTH: Harajuku, Yokyo, Japan CURRENT RESIDENCE: Osaka, Kyoto, Japan HISTORY:On a rainy 21st of June, a baby girl was born. Her name Akiko, and she was perfect. Although her parents didn't or must not have thought so. She was abandoned 10 days afterbirth and found in Osaka. It is unknown how she got there from Tokyo. All she was found with was a birth certificate.
Early in life she showed obvious signs of intelligence and wisdom. She soon grew into a mancer, being blessed on the 15th of May when she was 5. At the age of 12 she got her gifts.
As she grew up, she developed no physical dependency for her talents instead turning to science, art and languages. Kiki Yamaha, the care home nurse, enquired as to why. She answered she hated them and wished she was never different. She refused to be driven out by them, and so she refused to use them continuing until she went into collage.
She left the care home to attend university, and live as an independent student. This led her to meet other mancers who welcomed her. To which she gladly uses her talents ever trying to her perfect her gifts. This pushed her to her limits physically but unlike her friends she never has gotten attached to them, She uses her powers rarely for selfish reasons.
you can sing along while they're playin' my song NAME/ALIAS: Livi RP EXPERIENCE: a few years OTHER CHARACTERS: none RP EXAMPLE: Eema stood she saw the warriors returning with the food they had caught. "There back, there back, quick there comming, the warriors are coming" they have had lots of luck this time the prayers to the guardian must have worked. She ran to meet and help them carry the catch in. "Go away Eema your a girl, girls make clothes and cook why don't you go and do that" one of them shouted others laughed at her at that she drew her knife they drew back they knew she would have killed them she had killed a bear in front of them before they knew that they shouldn't have laughed. "sorry Eema really sorry"
She guided them back to the village each one thanking and those who laughed appologized again. the one who shouted at her approched her. "I am sorry Eema look i'll make it up to you-" "Just don't say it again i am capable of doing all the things you and the warriors do. just please don't say stuff because i am a girl. come on lets go to the village i bet the chief will be saying something."
(recognise this lol)
This application is by Livi (( Aurora !! of Caution 2.0. Credit to Reba McEntire for the lyrics, please do not steal or use without permission.
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Post by Jason Bones on Nov 8, 2011 16:13:57 GMT
Hi, I'm Dreamer and I'll be reviewing your app. Good start but there are a couple of things that need changing.
1) Ability Description - I'd like to see some in-depth abilities, be creative but not overly powerful. Look at the other members' app for help.
2) History needs work. We need to see two to three solid paragraphs of history.
3) RP Sample needs to be longer too
Once those are done you'll be accepted
Dreamer
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Post by Akiko Chihiro Yamashita on Nov 14, 2011 20:21:03 GMT
fixed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Jason Bones on Nov 14, 2011 20:34:30 GMT
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